Thursday, June 18, 2009

You closed the doors.
Just seeing me outside.


I was only passing by.
Never intended to come in
and stay with you.

For you had already told me
Not to expect anything more !

9 comments:

pankaj banerjee said...

Perfect clicking of snapshots of individual bubbles of memories!!
Bubbles are blues but die-hard……….
Clicking goes one after another. Each snapshot, bright, colorful
and vivid with words encased with powdery tears and pent-up grief.
Each word seeks a justice no court can mete out, yet, it speaks volume
of an injustice which might go unnoticed but for these tiny poems.
The album sure stirs the inner- most part of a human living.

mrniiiceguy said...

random thought ...

you saw me closing the doors,
but not the heart pouring out.

you were just passing by,
but i saw u pause at that very moment.

you never intended to come in,
thats when the tear fell off.

did you not see the chair i left for you outside,
hoping that you may want to wait for me a while.

That is when you told me i was a toy,
thats when i realized i was in love.

....is it any good ???

Srishti Padathiyaar said...

@ pankaj

I can't express my joy of seeing your comment after so long.... Yes, I have moved on but still the snapshots in my life wake me up with shocking nightmares..

But I enjoy it now.. for it's giving new thoughts n more posts..

I might live with this all my life...

Srishti Padathiyaar said...

@ mrniiiceguy

It was not me who closed the doors.. But him... :)

Rajeswari said...

I love all the other poems of yours,but this one just melts my heart.Its a sad sad situation ,but it often happens in real life .
By the way,i miss your facebook badge on this page:) It was a treat to see your changing images-like watching a little girl grow or something like that for me!!!:)

A Liberated Soul said...

'Why did I come to you again?'

Srishti Padathiyaar said...

@ raji chechi

I'm glad that you are enjoying my blog. :)I had to take the facebook badge off..

Well, its a sad situation but you can't help it at times when it's not in ur hands, right?!

@ my soul

Oh yeahhh.. Thats a question ! :D
I still pass by just to get a glance. :)

Rajeswari said...

Yes,i am enjoying your blog.And reading this blog is now a routine for me,like reading the news!:)Good work,kutty;thats why.Proud to be here.

Shaiju R said...

u jus pass away feelin/igonorin tht ther is not a home at all anywher ther