Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Long ago...
there lived an old man.
People called him 'insane'
For he slept on the streets
and had no worries still.
He lived with the 'cents'
thrown at him by the rich.

On a bright sunny day,
he was watching a couple.
He smiled at them,
and sang a love song.
A little girl came upto him
and asked, "What is love?"

He carelessly replied:

'They say love has no boundaries.
Yes, it has no boundaries when one
asks for commitment in love.
So dear, choose a man who has
love and boundaries in life !!!'


peter ivan said...

The images is clear but the last words did nt create the necessary punch.

mrniiiceguy said...

does it or does it not ... when you ask for commitments ???

A Liberated Soul said...

Ummm...I am thinking...

Srishti Padathiyaar said...

@ Peter ivan

Even I felt so... May be i can write more effective ones ! Thankx for ur honest opinion. :)

@ mrniiiceguy

That will still remmain a question in real life, I guess!

@ my soul

Now what?! :P